1. first sentence should answer who , what , when , why and how . it tells us what is going on in the picture. it needs to be in present tense like the action is still happening (no past tense words!)
2. the second sentence is in past tense , it should have information that you could not get by looking at the picture. if there are three people or less you must identify them by name.
Senior Courtney Jackson is at a football game in the year of 2011 smiling for the camera because she's a enthusiastic person. She was smiling because she was happy that she was at the football game cheering for the boys.
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