Writting a New Lead or Lede.

Article 1
Who? the rosenbergs
What? they were the orphans of the cold war
When? 1953
Where? the united states
Why? their parents were executed for being spies.

Lead: They were the most famous orphans of the cold war, only 6 and 10 years old in 1953 when their parents were executed at Sing Sing for delivering atomic-bomb secrets to the Soviet Union.

My Lead: Famous Orphans parents killed in the cold war for delivering secrets to the Soviet Union.


Article 2
Who? bidders on comics
What? comic books returning to shelves
Where? tune stores
When? this year
Why? because these comics are very rare and show a lot of the older stuff

Lead: After being hidden away for years, a copy of the original "Action Comics No. 1" comic book, featuring Superman and friends, will make a comeback.

My Lead:  After many years the original comic book "Action Comics No. 1" is coming back.